Correct me

[Hell Dragoner]

can u tell whats missing or how should I improve.
www.expage.com/rockerf

[Dom]

lets see here...


1. link to gu dont just say ur a member
2. "I am a member of that site named Black Myth Dragon." errrrrr... grammer errors
3. the font color doesnt look good on that background
4. the mini quiz is a poll... you dont have the answer either


theres a lot more i just dont feel like typing it

[Hell Dragoner]

ok thanks for telling correct it.I apreciate it.Thanks :)